Reply To: Tis the season to explode the atmosphere
blackcatbon reading over my shoulder says: “too many ‘ways'”. It doesn’t bother me that much, but maybe it could be fixed. He could find his ‘path’ instead of his ‘way’?
Somehow in my last post I forgot that ‘naughty things’ and ‘way through fog’ were alternatives for the same line. I think so far I have a slight preference toward some variation on ‘way\path through fog’, but either works for me.