Reply To: Extra last line in The Presidents
I haven’t heard a lot about hope (I haven’t heard a lot about the campaigns), but he seems to mention change a lot, we could say something slightly punny like ‘Barack’s work in change is a work in progress’ if only it would fit the rhythm. It uses the old ‘work in progress’ which used to be about W, so it ought to be similarly neutral, though it does sound more positive.
(on the subject of supposedly neutral things being positive… I rather like the fact that there’s a plus sign on the Swiss flag.)