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it's not something a fanboy would realistically do but i think the idea is it's supposed to be exaggerated for comic effect. at least that's how i read it.

i suppose he is relatively cuddly irl, too.

i might try to fit the word bubbles a little more closely to the words. generally in comics i've read, when your bubble has a lot of empty white space around the words, it's meant to indicate the words being spoken in a 'small' voice, or a whisper.

also, the comma after "no one" in panel 2 is unnecessary. actually both the commas in that word bubble are.

it's neat tho.