Reply To: Song-Fu 2
In the spirit of dantes here's my self assessment
Nice guitar sound (time to move past the eighties Tom). Plodding pace. Mismatch between the tone of the verse and the lyric. Solo seems to not take the song forward. The solo needs more of a defined melody and crescendo to finish. Probably the big stumbling block, the vocals have intonation problems as well as rhythmic issues on top of a fair to weak melody to work with. Lyrically it has a vague story and is missing a bridge. But it doesn't suck.
I've listened to all of them a couple times and made some notes for each which I'd be willing to share individually if any of the challengers thinks I might give them any insight. Having the second lowest vote total though I suspect most folks would figure what does he know and pass. Fair enough. Which leads me to ask if anyone had any thoughts on my tune feel free to share them publicly or privately. I promise I won't pout.
On the one hand I'm glad Mick has a vote now. On the other hand, now I'm a little nervous.