Reply To: Over There cover – now posted to YouTube!
i liked the wobbling down the stairs bit because i went immediately to a roughly spherical (ie terribly obese) person trying to navigate a staircase. it would work better as 'waddling' though, if that's the image you want to evoke.
eta that the chorus line might work better as 'over there you'll never feel at ease cause their food is totally soaked in grease'. i think the meter is neater that way.