Sounds good, unmodisch. Two suggestions, though: the F you use in the verse actually sounds like a Fmaj7 to me (1×3210). Also, in the chorus, I think the chords are actually
Two bars of:
Am E G D
(from Em to E). Other than that, great work!
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